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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Euclid, this is a deeply moving piece. You are blessed with a love who stays.

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MundaneMarvels's avatar

Euclid, this is so beautifully haunting, and may be one of your best. You captured a lifetime of love, fear, and vulnerability in just a few lines. It left a real weight on my heart.

This part especially stayed with me:

"We promised once to grow old together / But you grew so much / And I turned old, yet stayed the same." It is such a painfully honest reflection of how time can shift people differently, even when love remains.

Your words give voice to those quiet fears we rarely dare to say out loud. Thank you for writing something so raw and real. I will be thinking about this one for a long time.

Warm regards,

John

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